Bailey has had a bad relationships with people, he goes to school and gets picked on because he does not have the fancy shoes or clothes, Bailey goes and make 3 wishes (a good friend, not to be picked on anymore, wishes to get new clothes) Tya and Bailey become best friends, Tya invites Bailey over to dinner and then she realizes that he eats too messy, Bailey invites Tya over for dinner and he realizes that she eats too proper, they get into an argument because they are different, they finally realize that being different does not matter because that might be what keeps their relationship interesting.
It is going to connect because they are going to connect because like the story just flows together so well. I think that placing things in different settings will help with that flow. The moral of the story will be like so obvious because the story is a great example of the moral.
~ Taj Brimmer <3
I like how simple and yet how detailed you explained the actions and how the moral is. As well it seems very interesting how you are making the actions flow. But I still do not see what Bailey 3 wishes are. I think one of them is become best friends with Tya but are the other two the dinner?
ReplyDeleteBut good blog.
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I'm not seeing any magic here...in fact I think you skipped most of your story? Perhaps you just changed it, I don't know. Could you perhaps tell what the three wishes are (or the first wish at least)?
ReplyDeleteAside from that, you could have been a bit more detailed. Oh well, this was nice anyways.
Have a nice day.
This happens in daily life all the time. People hate each other for their differences, but then come together in the end. Nice flow in the story, and all this takes place in one day right?
ReplyDeleteI think this will take place over like a week or so..
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