Well... Since I have never written a book before I really do not know what is missing in my book. I wish I could know what is missing so I can have a good book but until then all I can do is follow the blogs that Mr. Prier is giving. I think that the part that is most lacking is the magic part. I really do not know how to incorporate magic into my story but I am trying.
I really want my story to stand out by the Jamaican culture because everyone is not doing that culture. I think that I could add more excitement into the story. Yes... I think that my story is kind of dull and I feel that I need to add a little more excitement just to keep the kids engaged into the story. I really think that the magic and number part is really going to hurt me because I STILL DONT KNOW how to incorporate that into the story.
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